Sunday, April 24, 2016

PB2A: Gender Ratio in Relation to Group Leadership Emergence


The article I have chosen is from the Journal of Applied Psychology, titled "The Effects of Proportional Representation and Gender Orientation of The Task on Emergent Leadership Behavior in Mixed-Gender Work Groups" and is by Karakowsky and Siegel. Like many studies, when finished it was sent to a journal for publication. This publication follows multiple conventions that are quickly caught upon further inspection. First, the paper opens with an abstract. The abstract is an introduction of sorts; it informs the reader of what the paper will cover. The abstract is placed at the beginning so readers can have a better understanding of what is being studied, as the titles are not always the most descriptive! Information presented is defended through the use of citations. Outside sources are quoted to build the background and defend the author’s claims. Citations are used to build the credibility of the premises written. The text is presented in two columns. The columns stand as two textual pillars, compiling the information that the researchers have input. This convention exists to keep the information organized; it’s hard to get lost between two blocks! The columns of text are only broken for headings and tables. The headers (usually italicized) break up sections, cluing the reader in on the information that will be discussed below it. The article covers a lot of information and in as such requires an efficient method of presentation. This need fueled the decision to use tables in the paper. A table organizes data obtained from research and presents it in an easy to read fashion for the reader’s convenience. The paper ends with the discussion section, where the findings are broken down. The discussion section is placed at the end to break down the technical jargon of the results section.
Karakowsky and Siegel use ethos and diction heavily throughout the paper. Ethos is their most common rhetorical feature with the citations being their preferred method of building it. The citations are a form of ethos as they uphold the statements being made by the duo. Their citation for the statement about women being more affected by gender incongruence is evidence of their need to defend their points (page 620). Ethos is also built by placing the author’s university below their name. By attaching an educational institution, the research that follows appears more credible. Science is based on evidence and the evidence they provide is through their citations and info presented.
The diction of the paper is notable with the use of jargon and high language. Jargon is used throughout the article with words like “tilted” and “skewed” taking new meanings (page 622). Technical research terms are also used by the authors and are a helpful way for a reader to know what field the paper is from. The technical terms let a reader know that what they are reading is an applied psychology paper and as such will use terms from that field. The jargon also serves to build ethos, as only applied psychologists would have different definitions for common words. The high language is exhibited through the lack of slang used in the article, creating a formal feel for the reading. The removal of slang combined with the use of polysyllable words create an elevated language which informs readers that the material being covered is both formal and serious. The word and language choice was a deliberate decision made by the authors’ to separate their work from pop culture works and represent themselves as experts. By avoiding slang and instead writing with jargon in high language, Karakowsky and Siegel build how they wish their paper to be read and represent themselves as scientists/psychologists.
The researchers wanted to know how gender ratios affected leadership behavior in mixed gender group; whether men or women were more affected (if at all) by being in the minority or majority group when the team is divided along gender lines. The research also covered how the gender association of the task affected leadership emergence of the respective genders. To answer these questions researchers used experimental observation where they observed multiple groups of varying gender distributions and recorded their discussions while they solved an assigned problem. The group discussions were recorded with the leadership of each group participant rated by group members and the research panel. The numbers were all compiled into a formula and the results were compared.

What struck me as most important to the piece was the discussion section where they listed the limitations of their study. The researchers admitted the difficulty of generalizing their findings based on their sample population, duration of the study, etc. This admittance of the lack of generalization is noteworthy as although their findings are interesting, they lack the ability to be applied outside of their specific parameters.

Thlog # 4

THLOG # 4

This week in writing 2 has been enlightening. The tips that we’ve gone over have been interesting with the reverse outline being more helpful than I first believed. I use outlines and filling in the blank often to work through a paper but the idea of doing that last never occurred to me. Breaking down each paragraph to a one sentence summary made the point of each segment clear and anything that broke the flow of ideas easily stood out. I see myself using reverse outlining in the future as it does add another way to catch anything that could have been missed.
Finishing the WP1 was relieving and working through the assignment in class was helpful. The peer review activity helped with revising the paper (everyone is super helpful with their comments) and made the final draft less daunting. Going from starting the paper and having no clue how to approach it to having some inkling of what makes genre has been fun. English class has always been a favorite of mine and writing is no different.
The in-class activities have been interesting with the murder project standing out the most. Writing the police report was fun but comparing how everyone wrote was the most interesting part. Seeing how every group came up with a completely different focus for their writing with the same info had me wonder about the link to the next assignment. I’m curious about what the next project will entail as it seems like a lot more than the previous writing project. Starting out I already feel confused about what exactly the assignment will be like but I’m probably thinking too far ahead. Narrowing down a topic will be tedious but I’m looking forward to deciding it, writing about a topic I choose definitely makes the work easier (and I have no one to blame but myself if it’s boring!).




Wednesday, April 6, 2016

PB1B

The science generator uses big words whenever possible. The words in the sentence serve to make the sentence longer and appear more scientific. This leads to sentences full of mindless jargon and long words randomly placed. It reads like the writer got their first thesaurus. The sentences are otherwise well organized and grammatically correct. Figures are used but since the words are generated randomly, they are meaningless. The paper is segmented through the use of headers, which act as transitions between the different topics covered.

The comic generator uses three frames with a random image filling each image. The comics are all done in color and include one or both of the main characters. The comics generated also focus on facial expression, drawing the characters faces so they fill most of the frame. This allows more details in the face to be shown, allowing emotion to more easily be conveyed to the reader. The comics vary in tone with some being incredibly dark, depicting suicide, while others show partying and compliments. This randomness leads to the whole comic rarely making sense as a whole. This nonsense is what makes the generator appealing as it can often lead to humorous sequences.

Contrary to the previous generators, the meme generator has a rigid structure; each meme must follow a set precedent. Each meme must have two lines, top to bottom, and use impact font text. Every meme is composed of an image that serves the dual purpose of pop culture reference and showing the subgenre of meme that the generator is following. The subgenre of the meme dictates that the content of the text must follow the image that accompanies it. For example, the Morpheus meme must begin with “what if I told you?”. This rigid structure allows the generator being able to create convincing memes that are often impossible to distinguish from human created memes.

The final generator I chose was the rap generator from rappad.co. The rap generator takes a random  word or phrase and uses it as a topic to create a song about. The generator tends to a basic rhyme scheme and attempts to base the rhymes of the topic. The songs make pop culture references whenever possible and however far from the topic they may be. The songs do not have a set length with some being only four bars long. The language used is always casual and often vulgar; with references to sex and drugs being frequent. Quotes from other rap songs are also used whenever possible with Tupac appearing to be the most popular to draw from. Bravado is common in all songs, with some form of flaunting of wealth or women existing.

What is happening in the generators can help someone understand genre because, the generators show, in an extreme manner, the actual conventions of a genre. The science paper generator also displays how figures are used and referenced, the frequency of citation, and the diction of a scientific paper. The exaggerated papers that the science paper generator creates can help a STEM student better understand what makes a CS paper. The meme generator can provide endless examples of a certain meme, allowing someone to learn how to make their own. The comic generator can help a beginning artist grasp the importance of facial expression and emotion in comics. The rap generator can help a beginning rapper understand basic internal rhyme in songs. The generators can create entertaining nonsense because they are truly random. The generators can still be used as a learning tool of genre by studying their exaggeration of their respective genres’ conventions.

Sunday, April 3, 2016

Weekly Log

            So far the first week has gone well for me. My family came down to Santa Barbara to visit for my birthday and we had a pleasant lunch. I was not able to visit home in since December, so it was nice to see my family in Santa Barbara. So far my classes look interesting enough and seems like this quarter will be a manageable one. Currently taking Feminist studies 50, which will be my first feminist studies class and I’m looking forward to it. I don’t have much formal knowledge of women in social justice and am interested in learning more about it. I am also taking a human geography class with a friend of mine as well. I rarely get to take classes with people I know, so it will be nice to have someone I know to review material with. I have been in good health, which is always a good thing. Watched El Clasico over the weekend and saw Barcelona fall to Real Madrid, much to my friend’s dismay. I’m not sure I’ve seen someone so into a game before in my life. I’ve only recently begun following soccer and one thing I have noticed is the dedication to the sport some fans have. I swear that soccer is a religious experience to them and seeing their team lose is like seeing God himself get killed. Barcelona fans take El Clasico more seriously than I think I ever could. The first week of the quarter has shown me that the next few months will be busy. Many of the due dates for the classes overlap, balancing org involvement with studying will be a challenge, and all of my classes require a lot of writing so I imagine myself in front of my laptop for most of the quarter. All being said, I have a good feeling about this quarter.

PB1A: Album Review

An album review is a textual genre that exists to judge an album on its merit, to answer the question of whether an album is good or not. The genre is one based on the reviewer’s opinion that is typically backed through some form of analysis of the album and how well they defend it. This defense of opinion makes album reviews an argument for the score the reviewer assigns to an album. Album reviews are written for music fans and act as a guide for how good or bad an album may be to them. Music fans follow album reviews as many of them listen to far too many artists to analyze each album. This leads to the audience wanting to know whether an album is worth listening to, creating a demand for album reviews. The reviews are released by magazines, critics, and popular music reviewers. They are all typically released within the week of release of an album, making the review more relevant to readers. A dated album review is a useless review. Album reviews vary in their style as different writers have differing takes on the album. Some reviews are lengthy, taking great steps to defend the opinion of the writer, while others are brief, taking a first impressions approach to the album. Some reviews will have a critical tone, especially if the reviewer did not find the album enjoyable. This leads to no two reviews having the same style, but they still share many conventions. Album reviews almost always quote the album they review, with the writer choosing some of their favorite lines from the project. These quotes serve as a form of textual evidence for what the reviewer is describing to the reader. Album reviews also have a scoring system of some sort that they use to assign a value to it. These scores stand as a quick way for readers to understand how the reviewer rated the album. The placement of the review score varies between critics, with some at the beginning and others at the end. The way the review score operates varies as well. Reviewers use different scales with some choosing scales of 1-5, others 1-10, and 1-100 as a scale to rate the album. Album reviews are album reviews because they analyze a sound and how it flows for an entire work. When an album is reviewed the songs are not only judged for their production, lyrics, etc. but how they fit the overall theme of the project as a whole. The flow from one track to another is judged just as closely as the song itself. Album reviews are only different from book reviews in how the writers describe sound instead of words. An album review tries to communicate how something sounds to someone who has never heard what the writer is describing. This leads to language that is specific and full of adjectives. An album review is an album review because it can turn a sound into words, words that can be used to imagine the sound.